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I'm in love with a criminal part 2

This is a story about a 19 years old girl. Her name is Barbara. She lives with her friends in a big house. One day they watch news of a new and extra bad criminal. And unfortunately, the criminal's home is in front of Barbara's and her friends' home. This means the criminal and Barbara are neighbors. Unfortunately, Barbara falls in love with him. They both later tell each other, that they like each other. But, because he's a criminal, her friends don't let her be with him. But still, she meets him secretly. She slowly guides him on the right path and stops his criminal stuff. Then see how this all happens. (If you haven't read book one, go and read, otherwise you won't understand the story)
parts: 15


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Chapter 5 of 15 - Next...

After some hours, it was nighttime. Adara and Andrew decided to stay at the beach at night. The rest of them went home. Barbara went and tried to turn on the news on her phone, but she couldn't because of a dead battery. "Shit! Ugh!" She said. She had an idea. She went to a TV lounge and Andrew was back. He was sitting on the couch and was about to turn on the news. And then barbara popped in front of his face. "Andrew" "Uh, yeah?" "Can I watch the news with you?" "Heh, sure. But last time you said you don't have any interest?" "Forget the past, hehe" Barbara sat with him and watched the news. After some minutes of the boring part. It told about king Devil. The reporter: now let's move to our next topic! King Devil, who did another trouble in the peaceful city. Blasted a bomb in an underground railroad tunnel. But luckily, no one was hurt. But it doesn't mean, no trouble created. He also blasted the underground water pipes ("hahaha, omg" barbara reacted) The reporter continued: and when he blasted pipes, cameras stopped working. We know, that he shot them. Now, for 2 days, there is no water in the city. Our suppliers supply water barely. And the second thing: he shapeshifts! He shapeshifted and robbed 10000$ from the bank. And also recorded a voice message on the recorder on the table, it said: "I, king Devil am robbing your money. And this isn't the end, stupids. I'll rob each and every bank in this city! (Wicked and evil laugh)" it means, he isn't done. He'll rob more banks. We have planned the strict and high-tech security, and hope for him to be prisoned. That's All for this time" Andrew turned off the news, as it was ended. They both sighed and still sitting. "Barbara, what do you think? Will they will be successful to catch him?" "Uh. I don't think so. King devil is so fast and smart, and he won't let them catch him easily!" "Is it a compliment for him?" "Uh, no way. Um...well, how many days left for us to leave?" She tried to change the subject "Um, 6 days. Why?" "Eh, nothing" "Ok. you were acting unfamiliar today...why?" "Uh...um..." "If you don't wanna tell, then it's ok" "Oh ok. Well, I was just thinking, nothing special, I guess" "Ok" She went back to her room. It was 10:30. Sleep time. She wore her sleeping suit and sat on her bed. Rose called her: "Hi, B! Wasup!?" "Nothing, just about to sleep" "Oh, how was the day?" "...n-nice...fine as usual" "Nope, something was UNUSUAL. What was it? Tell me" "I-i'm serious. Everything's fine" "Hey, bara. I thought I'm your best friend, and you share your deepest secrets with me...but I think I was wrong..." "Ugh! Fine! I'll open up. Stop blackmailing me" "Start now" "Sigh* actually...I was too busy today. At the beach, I didn't enjoy as I usually do. A restaurant, it was the same condition. Like...I ignored my friends. Sigh*" "Buh, why?" "Because I was thinking about... someone" "Gasp* your first love! At the beach" "Ugh! No! There is NO love at the beach!" "So what was bothering you?" "Uh, king...devil-" "WHAT THE HECK! why?" "I don't know" "You scared of him? Or somethin'?" "Uh! Yeah! Yeah. Since I heard he is too dangerous, I am scared! Heh" she lied "True?" "You don't believe me, right!? "I do. Don't be scared ok? Just try to ignore your thoughts" "Thanks for your suggestion!" "Don't say thanks, silly! We are friends!" "Okie. I collected some beautiful shells for ya" "Really! Aw! So sweet! Thanks!" "Now who's saying thanks!? Huh?" 'oh, hehe. Forgot, so" "Talk to you later. Bye" "Bye" "I-I can't believe it! I kept it secret from my best friend! It's so weird. I never kept anything secret from her! Is that mean...Did I fool her? No! I can't-i-i don't know what to do now? Uh. Sigh* just sleep" She gets so emotional, and skittish at some times. She went to sleep.


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