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I'm in love with a criminal part 2

This is a story about a 19 years old girl. Her name is Barbara. She lives with her friends in a big house. One day they watch news of a new and extra bad criminal. And unfortunately, the criminal's home is in front of Barbara's and her friends' home. This means the criminal and Barbara are neighbors. Unfortunately, Barbara falls in love with him. They both later tell each other, that they like each other. But, because he's a criminal, her friends don't let her be with him. But still, she meets him secretly. She slowly guides him on the right path and stops his criminal stuff. Then see how this all happens. (If you haven't read book one, go and read, otherwise you won't understand the story)
parts: 15


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Chapter 8 of 15 - After some days, something...

She still had 1 week's holiday. On a fine and light grey day, Barbara woke up at 9 AM. She dressed in black and a little bit white, and did whatever she does. After eating breakfast she decided to go out, because she was low on some of her stuff, so she went to buy it. She made a list of things on her phone and walked out. She was on her way. 15 minutes later, she heard someone coming towards her. In the same place where she met king devil, last time. There was no one there. And the only reason she chooses that street to go to is, that there is no one there, to make noise and traffic. But king devil was there. She saw him coming to her. He came in I step distance. He said: "How are you, barbara" "I-I'm fine" "Hm" "H-how are you?" "I'm good" he smirked at her. "Oh god, look at him! How handsome!" She thought "Where were you? Didn't come insight, from weeks" "I-i was out of the country" "You know, I did a lot of crimes in these days" "Heh, well, why are you telling me? Huh?" "Because you are the only one, from who I can share my stuff" Barbara's cheeks turned pink and she fell in love, as he said that she is the only person. "Devil" "Ha?" "You know, I still watched you on my phone. On news" "Oh, you are interested in news?" "Not really. I just watched it to see you" "Oh, you like to see me?" "Um. Yes I like to see you" "Eh" "Hey...I want to tell you something" "Yee?" "You are so smart. Are you a stunt man?" "Uh, maybe? Why do you think" "I saw you on the screen. You are such a stunt man" "Thank...s" "Hehe" "If you don't mind, can we have a walk...together" "Really! Sure" "Ok" They both walked together and butterflies fluttering in her stomach. She quickly changed her mind. She quit going to shop. She just fell for him and decided to walk with him, and somehow tell him that she has a crush on him. She slowly reached her hand to his hand to hold it. Before she could hold it, king devil held her hand tightly but nicely. She sighed and continue. They talked while walking: "Barbara?" "Whenever he says my name, I fall!" She thought "Barbara!?" "Gasp* what?" "Nothing, I just like to say your name" "Oh my. How lovely are you!!! "Wah?" "Sorry, sometimes I think a little bit loudly" "Yeah, I can see, it's a little bit loud, huh?" "Eheh" "Barbara" "Yes?" He stopped while holding her hand and staring at the ground, then he looks at her and speaks: "Do you really like to...be my friend?" "Why are you saying that?" She said in a low and soft voice "I don't know. I just think that you're gonna hurt your feelings" "Why?" "Because I'm with you. And I think I just can break heart, not win it. I don't want you to get hurt by the one you trust the most" "Sweetie, don't say that. I believe you, I trust you. And I know you won't hurt me, will you?" "I... Don't know" Then he leaves her hand and closes it tightly. Barbara held his hand again. And said: "I know you won't hurt me. I trust you. I-i know you are so sweet and kind. You-" She stops, and hugged him tightly, comforting him. After some moments they released each other. And stared into each other's eyes. Devil's bright red evil eyes and angel's sapphire blue shiny eyes. Both could notice love occurring in the eyes. Now this time, king Devil hugged her. The first time he did this himself. Then he released her. And they continued walking together.


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