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I'm in love with a criminal part 2

This is a story about a 19 years old girl. Her name is Barbara. She lives with her friends in a big house. One day they watch news of a new and extra bad criminal. And unfortunately, the criminal's home is in front of Barbara's and her friends' home. This means the criminal and Barbara are neighbors. Unfortunately, Barbara falls in love with him. They both later tell each other, that they like each other. But, because he's a criminal, her friends don't let her be with him. But still, she meets him secretly. She slowly guides him on the right path and stops his criminal stuff. Then see how this all happens. (If you haven't read book one, go and read, otherwise you won't understand the story)
parts: 15


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Chapter 4 of 15 - Barbara the weirdo

The rest of the time passed in different things. In unpacking stuff, cleaning, and other stuff. I am fast-forwarding FIVE days. Means 1 this one, and more days. Means almost one week. Fast forward......................... ~5 days later~ It was 9:45, Barbara woke up. After all the night, rewinding a 'cool' video of her secret love(king devil). She sat on the bed. And you know, she woke up only because of a dream! It was that...you know, I think you know who's a dream she saw? King devil, of course. Just as she was about to kiss him, she woke up. She was sitting on her bed and said to herself: "What_a_Terrible dream! I can't believe it! Ugh! I have to forget, forget and forget!" She did what she always does after waking up...you know. She went with her friends, to a restaurant for breakfast. They took a taxi and went to that restaurant. ~At the restaurant~ They all sat at their table and gave their orders. And when it was Barbara's turn to order: "Ma'am, what will you like to have?" Barbara like the unconscious, eyes wide opened, resting her head on her one hand. And like a DUMB. The waiter said again: "Uh, excuse me... ma'am?" She was still in her old position... still. William shook her lightly and said: "Barbara? You ok? Hello!?" "Ah! Gasp* oh, sorry...I just" "Give your order, Barbara" "Oh, ok" Finally, after 1000 years, she gave her order. Andrew: Is something wrong, Bara?" Barbara: uh, y-yes! Everything's fine, why?" Diana: you are acting like...kinda...drunk? Barbara: oh god. No! Drake: hmm...leave it. She's fine" They all got their orders, and after eating, they went back home. ~at the beach~ They all planned to go to the beach. This time, they all went to enjoy themselves. They all wore their swimming suits and went to the beach. Barbara slowly walked to the beach and stared at the water waves for a long time. Until her friends begin: Adara: is something wrong, Barbara? Barbara: ..... Andrew: um. You okay?" William and Diana: Barbara! Drake: BARBARA!!! Barbara: what! What!? Why the heck you shouting!?" Drake: because you were DEF! Everyone: fine! Don't fight like 5-year-olds


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