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I'm in love with a criminal part 2

This is a story about a 19 years old girl. Her name is Barbara. She lives with her friends in a big house. One day they watch news of a new and extra bad criminal. And unfortunately, the criminal's home is in front of Barbara's and her friends' home. This means the criminal and Barbara are neighbors. Unfortunately, Barbara falls in love with him. They both later tell each other, that they like each other. But, because he's a criminal, her friends don't let her be with him. But still, she meets him secretly. She slowly guides him on the right path and stops his criminal stuff. Then see how this all happens. (If you haven't read book one, go and read, otherwise you won't understand the story)
parts: 15


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Chapter 9 of 15 - ...something broke their trust

They were walking until they came to the end of the place. They could see people walking. "Devil, they will capture you, isn't it?" "Nah, I won't let them" "Uh k" They both escaped from the public and went to a quiet place where no one was. Barbara said: "Devil" "Hm?" "Promise me something" "Yeah?" "That you won't use your gun, at least try your best to prevent it. Don't use it that much, otherwise, I'll break up" "Um. I'll try" "Ok. Now I think I should go. Bye" "Bye" She went in the opposite direction. And decided to shop. She went to the shop. As she went there, she saw a board on the door of the shop. Closed. "What the heck! It's off? UGH! Fine! I am going to the smoothie shop!" She again changed her mood. And entered the shop. "Ma'am, what will you like?" "Um. I'll have vanilla and chocolate shake mixed up" "Just?" "Yeah, I'm on a diet" "You are already slim, ma'am" "Oh hehe" After drinking her shake, she went out of the shop. And just as, king Devil attacked in a market. And now it was in the middle of the road. barbara didn't notice that and now the police again thought that Barbara was with King devil. Oh no, she was trapped again. They both backed up until they touched each other. Barbara whispered to King devil: "What the hell, is going on?" "Just see. Hold my hand" She held his hand. There was a bike right behind them. He slowly walked to it and then quickly pulled barbara on the bike and started it. "Barbara, hold me tightly!" He said. She held him tightly from his waist. He stands the vehicle on its back wheel and spins it fastly. It was too much weird and unusual for Barbara. He spun it and drove it as fast as lightning. While riding, cops were running after him and Barbara. He saw cameras and all the things which record news. And shooted everything which records. And he kept shooting until he reached woods......now they were in woods. They both got off the bike, panting and panting a lot, because of the escaping. They both sat on the ground, still panting heavily. Barbara couldn't take it, even she was less tired than him. She took out a cold water bottle and drank enough water, to stop her from panting. She drank some water. Devil was still panting heavily. Inhale exhale and kept panting. Barbara said while handing him her water bottle: "Hey, drink some water" "Na-no need panting*" "You need it! Look at yourself! Seems like you're dying" "But" "Please have it, dev" "Fine" He snatched the bottle from her and drank the water wildly like a mad person. Like he has never drink water before. After drinking it, he felt much better. He handed the bottle to her: "Thank you so much" "My pleasure" "Huh" They were still on the ground, silent until Barbara said: "Devil! You broke your promise!" "What promise" "What promise!? That you won't use your gun! Remember!?" "Oh, I-" "Why! Why you broke it? I thought you are trustworthy worthy" "Ugh" "I don't trust you anymore! Go to hell, Devil" "Uh! Hey!" "You have given me enough proof that you can't be called a kind person! No need to give me more proof by shooting me!" "I'm not shooting you, Barba-" "Bye. I'm going home!"


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