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The kidnapper part 1

You were playing outside when a suspicious man dressed in black walked up to you. It was night so his clothes blended in. But what were his intentions...
parts: 4


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Chapter 1 of 4 - A normal day

BA DING! That was the sound of my iPad when I got a message. I read it and it said: come over to my house at 5 pm. Well, that was pretty late for a play date. I EAT DINNER AT THAT TIME! It was four thirty so I asked my mum to drive me there. I arrived early four forty eight. After my mum left my friend said she was going to throw a crazy party! DING DONG! That was the doorbell. I'll get it i said. It was her friends. At about five twenty everybody was here. IT WAS SOO COOL! Best party of my life! So much food, ice cream, lollies and chips galore. I looked out the window and it was dark outside. I looked at my watch and it was six. Why hasn't my mum came to pick me up yet? She wouldn't let me stay this long at a friends house. I would be having a shower now. I decided to enjoy it while it lasted so I danced my way to the snack table. After having some Fanta I hit the dance floor. GO EVIE GO EVIE! Everyone was chanting. After I got a little tired. I checked my watch and it was seven. I would be relaxing on the couch watching TV while drinking tea right now. That was so weird, why hasn't my mum picked me up yet? Has she forgotten about me? Now this was crazy. I walked back into the room and there were only four people including me. That was super weird. My friend Amy (party hoster) lead me to her room so we could play video games. Now it was 7 twenty. I would be in bed reading a book now. I wasn't aloud electronics at this time! Now this was crazy. Where is my mum? I excused myself to the kitchen to help myself to more snacks, and of course message my mum. I waited five minutes, no answer. Ten minutes, still no answer. I came back into the room to find that I was the only guest. Amy suggested that we went outside and played tennis. Well, I was going to sign up for tennis for the school holidays I guess this is how I could practice. At my tennis lessons, I could show everyone that I was better. I started the game and Amy missed! Zero to one. A while later I looked at my watch again. Eight this is the time I would be going to sleep. Why hasn't mum picked me up? Where is she? Has she forgotten about me? Maybe she thought it was a sleepover? No, she would have told me to pack then. Maybe she knew Amy was having a party? No she would never let me go for a night time party. The most likely thing is that my mum went to a party and told a babysitter to pick me up from my friends house but my mum forgot to give her the address so she is on the other side of Tasmania looking for me.


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