This story is about a two sisters named Edalyn and Lillith Coker. A murderer named Kyle Keishi has dedicated his whole life (since elementry school) to make Eda and Lily's mother (Bella Coker) to love him, and he'll do WHATEVER it takes. PS I have never written a thriller so please give me advice, thx :)!! Enjoy!
"Sure does. You may stop now," Kyle said, walking out of the barn.
"I'm hungry, Eda," Lilly whined.
"Me too, I'll find us something to eat," I said.
"Thanks, Eda!"
I tiptoed out of the barn into the dark of night. I shivered, it was so cold.
