This story is about a two sisters named Edalyn and Lillith Coker. A murderer named Kyle Keishi has dedicated his whole life (since elementry school) to make Eda and Lily's mother (Bella Coker) to love him, and he'll do WHATEVER it takes. PS I have never written a thriller so please give me advice, thx :)!! Enjoy!
"Kyle Keishi?!" My mom (who was tied up) screeched. We were in the country, no house or anything was around us, except for Kyle's property. His property was HUGE- no - GINORMOUS!!!!!!!!!!
"Yes, my sweet Bella, it is I, Kyle. I see you remember me," Kyle said, inching closer to mom.
"Mom who the heck IS this?" I yelled as Kyle tied me up.
I could have moved, but this guy seemed kind of scary. His shiny, jet black hair, his pale white skin and the black coat he was in made things even more scary.
"These are yours? They are adorable! And this one looks like she can fight!" Kyle said, pointing at me.
"Leave them alone," my mom said sternly.
"But they will be our children, once your, I guess husband is out of the way."
Kyle glared at dad, who was also tied up.
"Hello? No one ever answered my question, who the heck is HE?!" I asked again.
"Kyle and I have been in school together since elementary school and he's always, well-"
"Been in love with your mother. But she never. Loved. Me. Back!!!! So I would come up with lousy-"
"The word you are looking for is CRAZY and DRAMATIC plots to make me fall in love with you. But they-"
"They never worked. Eventually I gave up. But when she met your father, ugh. It was the worst day of my life."
"It was one of the best days of my life. Along with the birth of Edalyn and Lillith."
Mom smiled at us. How could she be SMILING when we were kidnapped.
"Today is the worst day of MY life! What are you gonna do with us anyways Kyle?" I asked.
"Well that is my secret. But you will never expect what is coming, but you girls won't be harmed badly. I promise," Kyle said.
He smiled, showing off yellowish whitish teeth. Then he pulled something of of his pocket. And threw it around us as he ran far away. I felt dizzy, then everything went black.
